Mizuki5 preview but I came up with hypothetical vocals

Instrumental: Nakiso
Vocals: Hatsune Miku
Tuning/Melody: Me
Version with that last lyric is here:    • Mizuki5 preview except I added vocals...  

woot woot I did terrible!! at least I tried

I love Nakiso sm I'm so glad he's making a comm!! Really excited to see how it actually turns out

Lyrics (JP)
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乱れた色彩が視界の隅々を汚す
目が見えなく
みえなく
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だから
焦りが私を純朴した
(EN)
Forgive me
Forgive me
Dear lord, forgive me!
A disarray of colors stains every nook and cranny of my vision
I can’t see
Can’t see
Dear lord, forgive me!
Forgive me
Forgive me
Dear lord, forgive me!
It sees
My impatience has made me go blind.