@animatornamedkiwi

This is pretty smooth, must say

@zea3647

ill see you when the stars align!

@idrk1507

Hey! Your voice was quite slow, which had a boring effect, despite the fact I know you wanted it to have another purpose. It would've had the intended effect if there was animation, but there was just unprofessional writing. The content itself was quite boring and cliche too.

(Saying this so you can improve as a content creator :). This is one of your early videos so keep up with the good work, well done)