@AbsolutlyChaoticEntity

THIS SONG WOULD BE SO FUN IN PROJECT SEKAI! IM NOT JOKING

@doubleyou_44

Very solid for a beginner

@JeCzar

I like how I can still hear the off-key note that he put intentionally

@Ozsamu

Yup, putting this in my vocaloid playlist >:)

@charlie.3210

this is a good song, especially for a beginner
i really don't think it's like amazing or groundbreaking but in my opinion it's what you'd hear from an artist that has potential to be realized
 good luck on your music career if you decide to follow it haha

@JoanitusLC

I really don't know why you dont want to release this on spotify. If you see mine its basically every single song I've finished, and nowadays I do think that my first song is absolute garbage, but I have it there just to show from where I started. A lot of my friens really like my first songs and actually think it was a good idea to publish them, so why not throw it out there, there is nothing wrong on throwing even more songs to an already full website

@Te.a_cup

The fact that the song is exactly 2 minutes is extremely satisfying... also fire song i litterally love this

@sakurakitsune333

For a first song, it's amazing and so good!! It really sounds like what someone advance in making original Vocaloid songs would make, which is incredible!!!

@mayo-naka

I deadass couldn't tell If this was gumi or Kafu for a second very cool tuning!

@V4G.

finally GUMI getting something 🥹🥹

@melocitysolo9574

Oh man, you really nailed it—especially for a total beginner. A few years from now, who knows? Maybe a song you create for Hatsune Miku will be performed at an arena concert, with 10,000 fans waving green glow sticks as Miku sings your track live on stage. 😆Yes—that kind of dream is possible for anyone. The potential is there for all of us!

@Oreo_named_Bill

Its been almost 5-6 years I haven't heard a Gumi song added (I may missed some) this is really well done!! 🎊🎂

@Airborne_10551

that one sole vocal on the dark line be perfect, nice!!

@R3e0

YESS ITS FIXED OMGG ive been waiting for this for so long

@r0ll1ngg1rl

flickering light in the city at night
and all the dreams i
chase fade into the sky
a melody is lost
i'm calling your name
hoping you'll hear
and feel the same as me

every heartbeat
it just echoes in the hase
pull me closer
don't let me drift away
can you feel it?
this song is for u darling‎
a whisper in the dark
is breaking into you

ah... shine with me
glow in the dark
even when we're inside
we will rise
come take my hand
our voices will take

flickering light in the city at night
and all the dreams i
chase fade into the sky
a melody is lost
i'm calling your name
hoping you'll hear
and feel the same as me

every feeling
it fades like a distant dream
come to me closer
don't let me fall too deep
can you feel it?
this melody is for u
our voice within the night
is calling out to you

ah... shine with me
light up the stars
even if it feels far
we will rise
no need to stray
our voices ignite the way!!!
with every note
we'll break the way!!!
forever as one
come what may

@lordcreepnt

it's perfect at 0:58

@WOwenGyattclapper-y7i

This song has helped me so much to cope with the pain and depression that I feel right now. Thank you for this masterpiece of a song and please put this song on Spotify

@heatedlemur8586

I don’t normally comment, but I HAD to let you know that you’re definitely going places if you continue making music. All the improvements let your first ever song deserve a permanent spot in my Vocaloid playlist

EDIT:
YOUR SONG IS ACTUALLY THE 100TH SONG IN MY PLAYLIST BIG W FOR BOTH OF US

@Okatami

Aweseome song! Also very good improvements in the songs beat and the volcaloid voice!
This is tbh one of my favorite songs now xD

Hope you will make more in the future!

@Sunfl0werGirl-610

THIS IS GONNA BE TRENDING IN THE FUTURE, TRUST ME