@JeCzar
I like how I can still hear the off-key note that he put intentionally
@doubleyou_44
Very solid for a beginner
@JoanitusLC
I really don't know why you dont want to release this on spotify. If you see mine its basically every single song I've finished, and nowadays I do think that my first song is absolute garbage, but I have it there just to show from where I started. A lot of my friens really like my first songs and actually think it was a good idea to publish them, so why not throw it out there, there is nothing wrong on throwing even more songs to an already full website
@Ozsamu
Yup, putting this in my vocaloid playlist >:)
@V4G.
finally GUMI getting something 🥹🥹
@charlie.3210
this is a good song, especially for a beginner i really don't think it's like amazing or groundbreaking but in my opinion it's what you'd hear from an artist that has potential to be realized good luck on your music career if you decide to follow it haha
@Te.a_cup
The fact that the song is exactly 2 minutes is extremely satisfying... also fire song i litterally love this
@sakurakitsune333
For a first song, it's amazing and so good!! It really sounds like what someone advance in making original Vocaloid songs would make, which is incredible!!!
@mayo-naka
I deadass couldn't tell If this was gumi or Kafu for a second very cool tuning!
@melocitysolo9574
Oh man, you really nailed it—especially for a total beginner. A few years from now, who knows? Maybe a song you create for Hatsune Miku will be performed at an arena concert, with 10,000 fans waving green glow sticks as Miku sings your track live on stage. 😆Yes—that kind of dream is possible for anyone. The potential is there for all of us!
@Airborne_10551
that one sole vocal on the dark line be perfect, nice!!
@Swedoumilkukoki
IT LOOKS LIKE A OFFICIAL VOCALOID SONG WTF😍
@Sunfl0werGirl-610
THIS IS GONNA BE TRENDING IN THE FUTURE, TRUST ME
@heatedlemur8586
I don’t normally comment, but I HAD to let you know that you’re definitely going places if you continue making music. All the improvements let your first ever song deserve a permanent spot in my Vocaloid playlist EDIT: YOUR SONG IS ACTUALLY THE 100TH SONG IN MY PLAYLIST BIG W FOR BOTH OF US
@R3e0
YESS ITS FIXED OMGG ive been waiting for this for so long
@aracnoides81
Im singing this for my school talent show, no cap, Ill actually do it.
@WOwenGyattclapper-y7i
This song has helped me so much to cope with the pain and depression that I feel right now. Thank you for this masterpiece of a song and please put this song on Spotify
@yomi__
Flickering light In the city at night And all the dreams I Chase fade into the sky A melody is lost Im calling your name Hoping you'll hear me And feel the same as me - Every heartbeat It just echoes in the haze Pull me closer Dont let me drift away Can you feel it? This song is for you darling A whisper in the dark Is breaking into you Ah, shine with me Glow in the dark Even when we're inside We will rise Come take my hand Our voices will take Flickering light In the city at night And all the dreams I Chase fade into the sky A melody is lost Im calling your name Hoping you'll hear me And feel the same as me Every feeling It fades like a distant dream Come to me closer Dont let me fall too deep Can you feel it? This melody is for you Our voice within the night Is calling out to you Ah, shine with me Light up the stars Even if it feels far We will rise No need to stray Our voices ignites the way With every note we'll break the way Forever as one, come what may (wrote it for me to sing)
@lordcreepnt
it's perfect at 0:58
@HahaImTired